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This is very much an experimental page. You guys think the backdrop looks good? That it might look better without?
How about the speechbubbles? They look better, or did you prefer the gradients?
I've made the outside outlines of the characters thicker than the rest of their outlines. You think that looks cool, or did you like them finer on the edges?
Opinions much appreciated!

Thanks again for all the support! Sorry for the tardiness!


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:iconin-uneighson1plz::iconin-uneighson2plz::iconsays3plz:WE ARE VINYLTAVIA. OUR POWER LEVEL IS RISING ABOVE ONE MILLION AND THERE'S NOTHING YOU CAN DO TO STOP US.
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:iconmetroid-life:
Metroid-Life Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Those eyes are just mesmerizing... cn I take a moment to say this is awesome beyond belief?
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
"Keep your mare on a leash"? Are you trying to be offensive in as many ways as possible?
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:iconpinklafter:
PinkLafter Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I quite like the backdrop, it really adds to the atmosphere.
The speech bubbles are much easier to read, though they also lend themselves to a more serious tone, so I would think perhaps more useful in serious situations? Or perhaps I'm simply being swept away by the context,
Did not really notice much difference in the lines, though the characters did seem a lot sharper in this page.

I really like the way your handling this, very well done indeed <3
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:icondarthshade245:
darthshade245 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
oh crap...closet-case lyra is being double-teamed...and not in the clop way
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:icondipsydew:
dipsydew Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
NOW KITH
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:iconcraigschanz:
CraigSchanz Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
The power level... It's... OVER 9,000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I love everything about this page! (I know your inbox is probably being bombarded, but I'M SHOVING MY PRAISE DOWN YOUR MAILBOX'S THROAT! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!)
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:iconraydhen:
Raydhen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
EPIC stare are EPIC
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:iconnicole-tupas:
Nicole-Tupas Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
U GUYS ARE AMAZING!!! :iconohmyglobplz:
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:iconelzipper7:
Elzipper7 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
The eyes! They're beautiful!
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:iconrobotic-entity-norn:
Robotic-Entity-Norn Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
This page was amazing. This art style is beautiful. 10 stars.
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:iconcupcakecrazy43:
CupcakeCrazy43 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
11 stars! :D
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:iconidk-youtellme:
IDK-youTellMe Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Well holy fucking shit, now that's a burn.
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:iconjoefox3272:
joefox3272 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Shit got real!!
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:iconzintic:
Zintic Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student General Artist
isnt her eyes magenta? Vinyls?
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:iconhewhoerasesmost:
HeWhoErasesMost Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
Nah, they only appeared that way because of the bluish tint of the scene. They're red.
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:iconzintic:
Zintic Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
but even tho is they are red, they looked nicer with the magenta eyes.
Red is a boring colour, and magenta is a combination of colours. and the eyes look like. even tho there is dark where she is standing it wouldn't change the colour. because it contadicts facts here and there... and blablabla...
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:iconhewhoerasesmost:
HeWhoErasesMost Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Personal opinion. I think it looks better red, and it's my comic. So guess what? They're red.
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:iconzintic:
Zintic Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
well its your decision yes. Just notifying.
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:iconhewhoerasesmost:
HeWhoErasesMost Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Notifying me of...?
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:iconzintic:
Zintic Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student General Artist
......Eyes.....Magenta.....NVM
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:iconhewhoerasesmost:
HeWhoErasesMost Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
But they're red! :iconohnoesplz:
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:iconzintic:
Zintic Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
then why didn't ehr hair change colour acording to the "bluish" tint? or the body?
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:iconhewhoerasesmost:
HeWhoErasesMost Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
It did, but she's already composed entirely of different shades of blue, so it's hard to notice.
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:iconmoiderahofsanity:
MoiderahOfSanity Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
:icontakethatplz:
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:iconalfafllffl:
Alfafllffl Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
:iconholditplz:
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:iconalfafllffl:
Alfafllffl Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
^No fucking Hold It :iconFUUUUplz:
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:iconalfafllffl:
Alfafllffl Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
FUCK
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:iconvinyl-derp:
Vinyl-Derp Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Win
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:iconhereticalrants:
HereticalRants Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
I read the last several pages while listening to "Sweetheart" by Foozogz.

It didn't really fit.
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:icontheblondredheadedone:
TheBlondRedHeadedOne Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I'm making a drawing off of that Vinyltavia thing, just saying.
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:iconz0mb1nat3r:
z0mb1nat3r Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
damn. thats awfully risky, accusing a homophobe of homosexuality, or anyone for that matter. i'm intruiged to see where this goes.
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:iconthepsychoticyandere:
ThePsychoticYandere Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
The speech bubbles are really nice and pretty. They make the text lines look very clear and easy to read. The effects of the speech bubbles add to the emotions of the characters more than ever before.

Also, just in case, I've been sneaking around and reading this quietly. Your art has really improved since the beginning and the storyline is very interesting. Everything has improved at a massive rate. Great job!
:iconfluttershyyayplz:
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:icont3chman:
t3chman Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
I like the thicker outlines a lot, and the background is a great change. And I love what you did with their eyes here!
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:iconwaywardkoorii:
Waywardkoorii Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm liking the background. It's very neutral and doesn't detract form the visuals. Better than a solid color or no color I think. the Bubbles are definitely better two I think. The gradient within the bubbles can be distracting to the reader. oh and DEM EYES!! Very nice.
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:iconelbronie:
ElBronie Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
I swear those eyes are friggen amazing.
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:iconakamaru01:
Akamaru01 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconin-uneighson1plz::iconin-uneighson2plz:Whoa. Cool
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:iconduckey03:
duckey03 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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:icon1nvisiblepinkunicorn:
I think I have been watching Gurren Lagann way too much again, as I half way expected this strip to end with them screaming "Just who the hell do you think we are?" Especially with the addition of "WE ARE VINYLTAVIA. OUR POWER LEVEL IS RISING ABOVE ONE MILLION AND THERE'S NOTHING YOU CAN DO TO STOP US."
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:iconspazturtle:
Spazturtle Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
I like the new text bubbles.
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:iconxxdakottaxx:
xXdakottaXx Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
i like the new speech bubbles how they meet the ponies's skin and mane/tail colour(Aussie we spell it colour not color) and i think it looks really great keep up the great work :D
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:iconthepoeticpaladin:
ThePoeticPaladin Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Pssst....

He lives in New Zealand. I think he spells it the same way as you.
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:iconimp0s5ible:
Imp0s5ible Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also, monocle-rubbing Lyra is cute.
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:iconredterm409:
redterm409 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
twas well writ indeed, good show thus far!
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:iconpunisher143:
Punisher143 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
I love 'Reason you suck' speeches! Especially if it ends with the person/pony on the receiving end getting better for it.
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:iconpinormous:
pinormous Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Tag-team that bitch!!! (wow... totally didn't mean it in a dirty way)

I really like the new background, thicker outlines, and speech bubbles!
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:iconxxdakottaxx:
xXdakottaXx Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
did you mean "tag-team that bitch!!!" or "tag-team that, bitch!!!"? 1st one sounding like gang banging the second being "take that bitch" so to speak
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:iconpinormous:
pinormous Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
As Vinyl and Tavi were going back and forth, bashing Lyra. That's the tag-team I was referring to. So, the first sentence (Without the comma), but not in a sexual way.
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:icondelphi-is-script:
Delphi-is-Script Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Burn, baby, burn :)
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:iconforlanceabice1:
ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Stick the guns to em ladies.
*Ahem* Then Soarin came screaming in his battle cry, "MY PIIIIIIE!" then promptly kidnapping Bon Bon and Surprise for no apparent reason, but not before bucking
dirt bags containing spiders at Octavia and Lyra. A VERY flabbergasted Spitfire, Rarity and Pinkie Pie arrived.

"Did anyone see that Blue Wonderbolt that kidnapped both Rainbow Dash and Applejack? He's gone bonkers after devouring a Pie poisoned by poisoned Yok."
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:iconhagamablabla:
Hagamablabla Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Best. Shipping. Ever.
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